SugaryWinter
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Initial thoughts of the first chapter... Well, I do like the plot and where the storyline is headed. I find the main character to be entertaining. However, I do have one quarrel with the chapter. As I was reading... I kept running into some grammatical errors. They're just minor things such as some of the sentences not being capitalized, and I did spot at least one sentence beginning with the word "and". The spelling was good and I appreciated the variety of word use. With that said, I will enjoy reading the rest of this in my spare time.