Comments of chapter undefined of All Round Martial Arts System

Sorry but this this story is all over the place. I can understand incorrect grammar but having a story that jumps from one point in time to another without it flowing with the story makes it hard to read or want to read past the first chapter

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kinda confused from the starting para