Comments of chapter undefined of Traveling To The World Of Anime With The Dark Souls System
Traveling To The World Of Anime With The Dark Souls System
Miko_Sayaki
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relationship wise, you kinda set everything in stone by making naruto a female, a possessive with "crazy" attached, It wont make sense later on, unless you really gonna write 2-3 chap for azumi development into a far more mature one, which is a hassle, pointless justification for azumi to accept hinata. other reason not to make it a 3 way. 1. tons of fics already done that (NaruHina), you gender bend naruto, and ship your mc with fem naruto, kinda pointless already to add her. 2. done a few *****-ery already between them 3. flooded with harem in this site, a single dedicated relationship would me more welcomed 4.regarding harem, even if its not a harem, a pseudo one, you sure you want to invite "harem pls" or "hinata in harem"/ "kurenai in harem" flooding your comment section? 5. if you want to have a go, i dont mind, add hinata, but thats it no more, unless you want people from my 4th point becoming salty and turning to those ****heads and asshats "dropped" goat****ers spamming comment section for not adding more girls to the relationship. but if you really want to add hinata, make it interesting, make it complicated but not at the same time. Make her stay obsessed with naruto, Harley Quinn x Poison Ivy type between hinata and azumi, instead of a romantic relationship with the MC, hinata and MC have a more sexual relationship fling. my point is you already pushed limits of what people generally comfortable writing, so might as well go ballistic and twist it if you decide to add hinata. I dont mind it if you add her, but honestly, dont add her, either way im cool.
