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Comments of chapter undefined of The Story Of Mars Tial Artist (Naruto Fan Fic)[ON HOLD]

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The Story Of Mars Tial Artist (Naruto Fan Fic)[ON HOLD]

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RageKittenOP
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So far so good seems like a nicely paced story and it seems you have your ideas prepared for the future already soooo keep up the great work and be original! Good luck!

3yr
jakstrider
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Sort of ill try to updatr ehen i can, i have the Main points of the story planned out its just I need to fill in the invetweens so widh me lUck

Pathetic_Uchiha:cool btw are like coming out of your hiatus?
2yr
Pathetic_Uchiha
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the flaw here you should add them seeing the mc alone then have a meeting at the end to talk about it so it's not like they are just ignoring the kid that's sitting there

2yr
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BeastYasa
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Ayeee a K Project person

3yr
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