Comments of chapter undefined of Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor

Calm down guys. They both promised to tell each other their secrets in this continent few chapters back.. so kick back and let author san do his thing

I hope the author will have a look at a fanfiction on webnovel called marvel's mutant gamer. it a very well written system novel and I hope your new novel will be as good or even better.

Hmmm, I just hope he won't get stuck there for months or years there like wulin. As for your other fanfic, you should already know what people hate in system genres so I hope u don't put some forced and undeclinable quests(if there's one) and a really annoying A.I.(if there's one)

Ok ii m interested in the new fic you are going to try but please dont lower the update rate of this novel for the new one, okay? Remember, i am watching you.....

man ..... I implore the author to update the auxillary chapter that explains Huang Yu's stats .... or maybe make another auxillary chapter ....

Thank for the chapter, consider Gu Yue saw Jorm before, wouldn't she recognize it that's it Huang Yu? lol

Once huangyu reaches a certain level, he should start to notice how unbalanced cultivation worlds truly are. That it could not have been designed by the Dao at all. I dont see evolution happening at all in the douluo universe. It is stagnant. Also, how does someone destroy or absorb the Dao??? The unreliable narrator pointed that out in jorm's attacks. It is like saying that in a computer game, the in-game attack destroyed or absorbed the software or coding... I think i also described what a blackhole is yesterday in daoist terms, they are also portals to the spirit world.*yin type stars**cough* Dont worry, just having fun poking at the logic :) Keep up the great work!

I have a suggestion for the author about the new fanfic .... if you wanted to make it in the first timeline of the doulou dalu world , along with a system .... there's a similar novel , called doulou dalu system , it was good for sometime till it turned horrifying as its author increased the harem to great degrees & made the MC have several powers that need a few pages to be stated with their titles & robbed the Hax abilities of future MCs of other timelines .... other than that , I believe reading it may give you inspiration to make an infinitely better one ....

One thing about might makes right worlds and fantasy worlds is that the concept of mental health doesnt exist. Mental strength(energy) does not exactly equate to mental health(a bit more complicated than that). Already tried, not how it works. I dont see how someone like ditian could live for over 1000 and still function perfectly fine. Unless he is mentally challenged. But then the "gods"... It is not a matter of strength. Yup, very convenient. I also noticed that huangyu can seemingly do long meditations and not mess up. What is he really doing? I...think he is doing cultivation,not meditation.*sweatdrop* Yup, its a mess. Anyways,thanks for the chapter!

Or we always have the basement where you could always work at hahahhahahahahha!!!!😈 P.S. Just give me a address I’ll be there in a jiffy hehe😋

If you make a new fan fic imma start grinding other accounts just to make yours be number one

I really want Gu yue to confront Huang yu about this so they can both start to clear the room

Thanks

Good

Thanks for the Chapter ! I like ur idea for a system story , I'm sure u would be able to write a good fanfiction of DD1 with a system

Nooo!!! Not the cliffhanger!!!!

now this will be even more fun when he ascend to divine realm and make those gods world upside down

Just a suggestion, but if you are going to use a system for the new fic. Avoid making the majority of each chapter be the menus, item/ability descriptions. It is a major pitfall of system stories. Another issue I've seen is that system stories tend to fail to be completed is that the numbers on stats and the rate of progression causes the authors to write themselves into a corner on where to go next. tldr: Avoid overusing the menus and numbers on stats/progression as it can become hard to balance.

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i had a thought of the mc having a "DODOGAMA" as his second spirit ring ......CAUSE HE'S SUCH A GOOD BOI YES HE IS . with his effects being he can feed his dodo different ore's to upgrade his swords idk "toughness" i guess as a side effect with the main effect being heat as in he can heat up his sword to like 1500 degree's at 10 year old ring and it adds another 0 or 00 for each ring lvl up .... kinda hard to fight an enemy when he starts melting the area around him