sola_cola
Author you did an amazing job with Nero's emotional scene. I loved it but as his character has been I suspected this might be his cruel plan but thankfully these are his actual feelings... I love it. Nero's obsession towards Neoma isn't healthy and it can be hard to act like a child and express it when you feel like an adult inside. Also in their first life, I believe Nero was mean towards Neoma as she didn't show her care for him, unfortunately due to her situation and jealousy but Nero seemed to still care a little about her back. I hope Nero's arc isn't too far.
Sola_Cola, 👏👏👏👍 You did a fantastic job in handling Nero’s emotional 🥲 scene. I too was nearly in tears. I felt deeply for Mona especially, she gave up so much in the beginning for her children survival, only once again to be separated from her son. That is so painful 😖. So happy both parents understand his motive in choosing the current path he is to embark on, though a painful one. I am glad he chose to include Neoma in the conversation with their parents. What does the Cosmic Tree wants?