Comments of chapter undefined of My Touch Corpse System

Good day! ^^ I hope the meme joke I made in the last chapter didn't offend you. But if it did, then here is my apology. I am sorry. Anyway, throw some love and praise at me if enjoyed the joke or for no reason at all. ^^

The mc really talks way too much, the plot doesn't go anywhere, it's 90% the mc talking about nothing important and repeating himself around 3 times saying the same thing, it started well, but now is becoming like this

We know he is a selfish villain, no need to repeat it every chapterd. To many things repeated every chapter. Him being a vilain? Ok. Him not even trusting himself? That’s becoming a little bit too much. That’s the path to insanity, the kind of insanity brought by cosmic horror.

oh well i miss you but i miss this fanfic more. i just hoping that it would 4 chapters but btw thanks for the chaps.

Great story but can you cut back a little on the 4th wall breaking or explaining that "He is a Villain" in every chapter. We get it and enjoy your story and would like more of it and less explaining every action he takes, mainly when the explanation boils down to "He is a Villain". Other than that, Great story!

thanks

The mc shooting them was unnecessary, they had a spear, mc has a gun, he could have just shot at the ground near them and said "Fuck Off". What is the guy with the spear gonna do after that? Of course if he still has any braincells left, he will gladly **** off.

Thanks for the chapter.

I think he should get the Demon King's bloodline.

thanks for the chapter, just wish there was more progress, like.. just hear me out.. maby a little less monologing?

noice, can't wait for the r-18 ;)

bro great chapters waiting for new chapter. Good luck 4 next time

I'm more curious then anything. The timeline 'correcting' itself, if anything should be affecting komuro who is author knows where. Ye shouldn't be worrying about plot or trying to read ahead in the storyline at all cause he has already royally screwed it up so much it I reliable.

startin to think the MC killed his parents

Nice ❤️

Thanks for chapter

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nice chapter 😁

Firstly this i think the mc has a personality that suits AOT but in last that Only my opinion