Ur_girl_next_door
Interesting storyline here. Would be an wasy read if every chapter disnt start with the first 1/3 of the previous one having to quickly scroll through it to get to the rest of the story. Other than that, not a bad start :) I do feel hopelessly sorry for the girl & hope she will finally excape the claws of this devil for good and end up in the arms of her childhood boy-friend.
Crazy dodos don't even know what is coming their way... Karma will serve them. Sometimes karma is unfair like when Aleina got captured for no reason or when Jake and Rosa had to go to jail... Sorry I sound like this I had to write an ELA thingy🥱.... I love your book❤️😊... Keep making more chapters and take a nice rest😁