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Comments of chapter undefined of The Incubus System

Witch_0f_Greed_
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dont cut the r 18 short if it affects the characters and the story

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DragonKing_Akuma
DragonKing_AkumaLv4DragonKing_Akuma

I dont think you should change it author the story is already amazing as is

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kamehgahskiida
kamehgahskiidaLv11kamehgahskiida

Although I like the plot more I'm still having fun reading them. Thanks for the chapter!

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DeusVult55
DeusVult55Lv12DeusVult55

.....I mean We all know what we getting into so I see no reason for them to complain ....the ones who pay didn't...

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Goldenzeal
GoldenzealLv13Goldenzeal

I don't particularly mind the game's being long but I can see why some would... can't please everyone im afraid [img=update]

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sweetevil
sweetevilLv15sweetevil

I really like the games it builds suspension and you don't know if they will push him over the edge or not. it is also a change of pace. Plus it's fun . also this is your story not other people that read it . if that was the case they should write it them selves. I have stuck to this story so far and had no complaints. and I haven't seen complaints from anyone else on this site. I look forward to reading more chapter and I belive everyone else does too

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Alex_Preszler
Alex_PreszlerLv12Alex_Preszler

hey auther I really like what you are doing and doing it by the rules but I kinda hate auther's who put there work on patron sometimes because sometimes the work they had was to much in the end they have to get paid for it but I really like how this story going but I noticed that you added a pregnant tag to the story what are you going to do on that and don't listen how complain a lot in life because in the end they had to tell you " I hate what you are doing with the story" but in the end you should not care what backlash you get because it just yelling at you to just get back at you for no reason

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Ziond
ZiondLv4Ziond

I think it’s better not to change it. More Readers like whats happening rn. the ones who paid liked it too.

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Alexhale025
Alexhale025Lv1Alexhale025

I like the dirty dare chapters. I don't care that its long. I support you

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Cypher
CypherLv14Cypher

hello Author, i don't know about others that have nothing better to do than complain about everything but as for me i am enjoying your novel so dont listen to the idiots that complain, its better for your health that way.

Reganin
ReganinLv15Reganin

Author-san In all fairness, it does matter whether it is a love scene, a battle, or worldview builder... more than 3-4 chapters feels like a drag. The play must go on! (The story needs to move forward ) Just trying to make some constructive criticisms. I do enjoy the story, but if a scene is going to last several chapters 3,5, 10, or whatever ... it needs to be released together as if it was 1 .... so it would also be easier (less demanding ) on you if they were fewer in number.

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Hitler_kun
Hitler_kunLv4Hitler_kun

Thanks for the chapter

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MrMoha94
MrMoha94Lv5MrMoha94

Thx for the chapter

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Snake1Man_
Snake1Man_Lv13Snake1Man_

it's fun tho

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bojken_thebutcher
bojken_thebutcherLv5bojken_thebutcher

you are doong good man we have now anime and films close to **** and nasty stuff and novels with tags that tell em tits and ass ahead the story is good just dont rush it you can see some information on other deamons , you have to at least introduce the other demihumans like teasing ethan or other foringers , abylities, some world lore , minorites of the deamons, other deamons and maybe yokai or folklore demons

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MonkeyLord37
MonkeyLord37Lv13MonkeyLord37

I like books!

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Reaper_210
Reaper_210Lv5Reaper_210

Thanks for the chapter

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Mer1in
Mer1inLv4Mer1in

Ty for the chap

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TheMurderer
TheMurdererLv3TheMurderer

Continue as is

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Joe_Ortega
Joe_OrtegaLv1Joe_Ortega

Thx