Nanakawaichan
I really like the games it builds suspension and you don't know if they will push him over the edge or not. it is also a change of pace. Plus it's fun . also this is your story not other people that read it . if that was the case they should write it them selves. I have stuck to this story so far and had no complaints. and I haven't seen complaints from anyone else on this site. I look forward to reading more chapter and I belive everyone else does too
hey auther I really like what you are doing and doing it by the rules but I kinda hate auther's who put there work on patron sometimes because sometimes the work they had was to much in the end they have to get paid for it but I really like how this story going but I noticed that you added a pregnant tag to the story what are you going to do on that and don't listen how complain a lot in life because in the end they had to tell you " I hate what you are doing with the story" but in the end you should not care what backlash you get because it just yelling at you to just get back at you for no reason
Author-san In all fairness, it does matter whether it is a love scene, a battle, or worldview builder... more than 3-4 chapters feels like a drag. The play must go on! (The story needs to move forward ) Just trying to make some constructive criticisms. I do enjoy the story, but if a scene is going to last several chapters 3,5, 10, or whatever ... it needs to be released together as if it was 1 .... so it would also be easier (less demanding ) on you if they were fewer in number.
you are doong good man we have now anime and films close to **** and nasty stuff and novels with tags that tell em tits and ass ahead the story is good just dont rush it you can see some information on other deamons , you have to at least introduce the other demihumans like teasing ethan or other foringers , abylities, some world lore , minorites of the deamons, other deamons and maybe yokai or folklore demons