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Comments of chapter undefined of The Incubus System

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The Incubus System

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Yukisen
YukisenLv11Yukisen

Poorly written in regards with emotions. Doesn't understand the gravity of the situation to interpret the emotions that the characters should have felt that would have been laid out towards the reader. Good story no doubt just a poorly written chapter.

3yr
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Yukisen
YukisenLv11Yukisen

I barely saw this little rat comment lol, it was poorly written dumbass, in regards to the emotional writing of the feeling of death, he almost died. It was a poorly written chapter in this aspect, get outta here lmao

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3yr
Bivy_sama
Bivy_samaLv11Bivy_sama

Ah I wonder if everyone is gonna stay mad the entire next chapter as well like children that got there favorite toy taken from them

2yr
2
Ravi_Bhaskar
Ravi_BhaskarLv4Ravi_Bhaskar

Thanks for the chapter

3yr
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Yamamoto_shini
Yamamoto_shiniLv3Yamamoto_shini

eres una basura de autor solo por este capitulo (que le hiciste a el mc)

5mth
Reaper_210
Reaper_210Lv5Reaper_210

Thanks for the chapter

3yr
Yellow_bunny
Yellow_bunnyLv11Yellow_bunny

thanks

3yr
Display
DisplayLv10Display

thanks

3yr
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