Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/Doom
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The_High_Father
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The_High_Father
You either give the characters immortality or finish the story, both are not possible. It's good to know what you have planned for the story, but for me the end of the story is like I said in the previous chapter, mc becomes a taxi driver and mediates a hikikomori voyeur! I found something interesting that is Martha's interest in MC: was it a thing of love at first sight? Were you really trying to write a teenage romance with Martha? It is to be expected that you give up, I should have warned you that you are going into hell as soon as I realized that Martha was acting strange, but because of Jeanne, I assumed that all the rulers were intrusive strangers in their own way. I don't feel bad about the story ending here, there have been many chapters and you haven't spoiled the story either, the ending was satisfactory enough, it's bad not having more to read, but it's not like I paid you to write, You don't owe me, I don't charge you thanks for the sensei classes, the chat here was the most fun I had on the webnovel
