Comments of chapter undefined of The Last Primal

This is a great book every aspect I have explored has been filled with a beautiful yet at times frustrating as it should be. As things seem to be going great, a twist is thrown, kind of like real life, all in order same as life, what gets me is when real time greed sets in and the writer succumbs . Usually noticed by the readers , without even consciously realizing that the chapters are getting smaller and smaller causing the unsuspecting and loyal reader to spend more and more coins, just to finish a book that they put their heart, soul, support,money, and love for the writer into! Just to find out in the end, that they were betrayed for a few extra coins. This gentleman's book is good enough without all that, and should he just leave things as they were from the beginning he can looks forward to a solid customer fan base that will follow his every written word without any tricks. YOU are awesome! YOU are a great writer! YOU need no tricks! Do your thing and write for the people first, the money and fame will follow!