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Comments of chapter undefined of The Last Primal

SodaBo_Bomb
SodaBo_BombLv14SodaBo_Bomb

Whats with the sudden shift to "your" instead of "my"?

aDreamer
aDreamerLv12aDreamer

it was really weird. I've seen novels written in first person and third person, but never second person like this...

Spejs
SpejsLv5Spejs

Why mc keeps repeating Enya's explanations in other words? It's really annoying and gives me a feeling that author thinks we are too dumb to understand information the first time

SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5SorcererCat

Author I would suggest calling it Pure instead of Clean for the DNA/Blood-Line.

EddieG
EddieGLv14EddieG

seems quite interesting so far

Kitara_Kay
Kitara_KayLv5Kitara_Kay

😜exp

wierzba
wierzbaLv4wierzba

good

Ozonelayer
OzonelayerLv14Ozonelayer

he enjoys the bug life

Dante_Luca
Dante_LucaLv3Dante_Luca

I like the system that the author built here, but can someone please tell me if I should read 'reborn: evolve from nothing'?

boubacar_barry
boubacar_barryLv3boubacar_barry

When is he gonna be born

God_Of_Laziness
God_Of_LazinessLv3God_Of_Laziness

Thanks for the amazing chapters!

Dakota_Noblitt
Dakota_NoblittLv15Dakota_Noblitt

This is seeming like it's gonna be a good read :)

Dator_David
Dator_DavidLv13Dator_David

still HERE(- '

SoraxKairi
SoraxKairiLv5SoraxKairi

Thanks for your hard work

GODKINGASH
GODKINGASHLv13GODKINGASH

Nice

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx