UnderTheBridge
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is this story makes you chapter 15, I will give it a review most likely, most likely!
I think you need more than that
I'm curious to see how far he will go, obviously he will make new worlds.
In really is i interesting
i like the reason given out but the repetition of explanations are annoying. your readers are smart enough not to be reminded in every paragraph of the concepts of creation and etc.
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thanks for chapter
