This was so difficult to follow. Keeping the characters straight and what’s happening. Phew. The grammar was also hard to read. A modest start but...also wth is up with describing the women so nonsensically?
Please create a characters sheet. I have to read a single sentence for 2-3 times just so that I wouldn't confuse the names especially Chinese names. Ugh 😣
annoying start in many ways, but I'll wait until he gets to earth (if it's soon) to make the final determination of whether this novel makes my cut. beginnings can be rough...