Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The eldest saiyan brother.

No, you shouldn't change any chapters. It both shows how much better your getting at writing with each passing one. To me, this book is just amazing. Plus, if you do change some chapters, a bunch of us who keep track will have to re-read them. Well, that's just the lazy in me talking 😅

No, the chapter're really good, dpn't change them ! Thank you for the chapter !

Can you tell us which chapters and in which way You would change them.

It's okay, don't change it. We've gone this far and still reading your story so it's nonsense to me. Though it will be great to check some wrong grammar from the past chapters for your new readers you have.

No need to change anything “beta” or not, to me he was clearly and still is the Alpha all along. Great chapter thanks keep it up

You do not need to change anything because the plot is fine and if you take and change something it can become more op than it already is

Tbh i really like his personality, at the begining you were just figuring everything out so i guess it doesn't really translate as clearly.

well, i would just say, i would appreciate if it doesnt turns into a harem story, not like it would matter much, but i would still love it to be a non-harem and as for changes in the chapters, to hell with beta and all i love ur work and would like to keep reading it

don't change the beginning its called character growth and was very well done

Thank you for the chapter. As for changing some chapters, *shrug*, it doesn't matter to me. Do what you think is best. Though, if you do change things, I'd really appreciate a summary of the changes in an author's note, so I don't have to reread too much just to find the differences.

Thanks for the chapter~! Though what does beta even mean?

Don't change anything, just take out new chapters with the improvements you want.

thanks for the chapter keep writing

Thanks for the Chapter..

nah I like the opening

Little did he know, Nami heard everything

ahhhhh i need luffys journey and meeting his crew and then mc will meet them again and they all shocked :( takes way to long

lol Adam has met a few of his brothers crewmates

Thanks for the chapter!!!