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Comments of chapter undefined of Travelling the Heavens

SecretWolf
SecretWolfLv3SecretWolf

A few too many cliches here... fat friend needs saving with hidden potential... looking for love.. Shui's admirer comes and gets impressed... She has a forced situation... fatty suddenly grows balls and soon happily ever after.... She admires his determination and get impressed... yadi yada yada conflict.. she is saved they fall in love. I would suggest not to use chiches one after the other. Especially theses ones that have already been milked dry by the wuxia genre.

Zer0s
Zer0sAuthorZer0s

Don't worry, Serina doesn't match Fatty's taste. Sorry about the rest of stuff tho

Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

i agree with what secret wolf said. this story doesnt need to rely on such cliches..... also where is shui's childhood friend? i forgot her name... was it lily? his aunt's daughter who came to storm manor years ago....