Nezothecat
It bothers me that Owly didn't refute Note's statement and agreeing with it instead. I was expecting for Owly to defend Naell... And btw I want to tell you this too : Naell's behaviour is always described as icy-cold/evil on the outside but really nervous/anxious on the inside. I think this one should be changed a little... I don't feel good about it bc everyone always misunderstand him, thinking he is evil and unfriendly. It kinda reminded me of "my death flag shows no sign of ending" where the MC suffered so much. Please don't let it take turns to that authorđ Naell deserved happiness and loveđ˘â¤ď¸ AND! One more thing. This one bothers me too. The original protagonist of that world (forgot the name) doesn't seem to be that special so far. It doesn't gives us a protagonist vibe. I hope this is fixed too. Well, actually I don't intend to write so many critism...sorry if this burdened you, author. Please keep up the good work. Altough this comment may sound like I dislike this novel but! I actually love this novel very muchâ¤ď¸ Looking forward to the next chapter. See u next week, author. Thank youđ