Comments of chapter undefined of Unsealing Emptiness
Unsealing Emptiness
Bird_0f_Hermes
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Ok, I see now. I hope Raven is more of her own character later and less of a trope (what other comments refer to as a “girl”, a cliche common in fiction that I’ve never run into in reality)
I kept thinking about this comment, so let me explain a bit. For example, sniffing someone else’s clothes for what seems to be no reason followed by stuttering denials when asked what they’re doing - trope. Another way this scene could’ve played out, the shirt actually smells like something and Raven sniffs it trying to figure out what the smell is. Of course, you’re free to write what you like. This is just some food for thought.
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Something tells me that it will be the cliche female character that always seems in heat every time it comes to the MC, gives me an XD courage I will try to read a few more chapters but if that girl follows then I will leave it, the novel was good, I liked it very much but I can not with this change and it is very contradictory as the MC sees things , he is worth a peanut the life of others or whatever happens around him and out of nowhere cares about the girl who even saves her because as he will weigh on his mind Something tells me that it will be the cliche female character that always seems in heat every time it comes to the MC, gives me an XD courage I will try to read a few more chapters but if that girl follows then I will leave it, the novel was good, I liked it very much but I can not with this change and it is very contradictory as the MC sees things , he is worth a peanut the life of others or whatever happens around him and out of nowhere cares about the girl who even saves her because as he will weigh on his mind if Something tells me that it will be the cliche female character that always seems in heat every time it comes to the MC, gives me an XD courage I will try to read a few more chapters but if that girl follows then I will leave it, the novel was good, I liked it very much but I can not with this change and it is very contradictory as the MC sees things , he is worth a peanut the life of others or whatever happens around him and out of nowhere cares about the girl who even saves her because as he will weigh on his mind if he died
