Purplebride
Author, the story is great. Your writing is really good, Please keep this in mind if you do any edits. You have been using the word "is" instead of "it's" or "it is" in a lot of places in the novel. For example, in this chapter, August is in his office, and she says, "Is me August" it should be written as "It's me, August". Sorry, I'm not usually a grammar corrector, but it's kind of making me twitchy.