Cyclxne
bro now the good part is starting... keep up your best work... don't let all this build up and personality growth go down the drain now that the MC has got magic... i don't want to watch a stupid MC who will go on announcing to people that i have got magic now and i will take revenge... i want him to understand his powers a little and become a little more strong before attacking his enemies....also let him keep his secrets to himself and not even tell to his sister or the other girl... overall hope his character/personality remains best and dont become retard by time....
Mn. The start of a OP mc with a cold personality is coming to take revenge on those who took away his parents. However the secret that he has chaos element is too huge. His harem and friends shouldnt know this secret. I always hate an open mc who, nevertheless is kind to his friends, but he is tht much kind and open that he reveals his secrets. So I wouldn't want that to happen. There is also the harem thing. I don't want his wives to be dominating or annoying. Like when mc protects them and they realize that they will be left behind by him.. That sentiment shouldn't come and his wives.should behave like a typical harem or else it looks cringe to me.