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Comments of chapter undefined of The Mage of Primordial Chaos

Robert_Tabor
Robert_TaborLv15Robert_Tabor

I've enjoyed your book so far and i am invested in continuing lol keep it up[img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp]

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LustDemon
LustDemonLv1LustDemon

bro now the good part is starting... keep up your best work... don't let all this build up and personality growth go down the drain now that the MC has got magic... i don't want to watch a stupid MC who will go on announcing to people that i have got magic now and i will take revenge... i want him to understand his powers a little and become a little more strong before attacking his enemies....also let him keep his secrets to himself and not even tell to his sister or the other girl... overall hope his character/personality remains best and dont become retard by time....

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1rex
1rexLv141rex

Romance does seem a rushed right now, but I'm not far so I can't judge yet. Plus I'm interested about his revenge. Hopefully he'll start making decisions for himself, but it makes sense right now since he's always been powerless.

Battoth
BattothLv15Battoth

I was kind of hoping the necklace thing would turn into dust after it helped him awaken. Or at least be like the treasures that can be stored in the dantian or wherever cultivators put away their soulbound stuffs. It's annoying when important treasures can be easily stolen. 😐

Judejayden
JudejaydenLv4Judejayden

I can't keep going concept is good power is good mc. childish I hate non pragmatic mc the most.

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Kido_TO
Kido_TOLv4Kido_TO

Mn. The start of a OP mc with a cold personality is coming to take revenge on those who took away his parents. However the secret that he has chaos element is too huge. His harem and friends shouldnt know this secret. I always hate an open mc who, nevertheless is kind to his friends, but he is tht much kind and open that he reveals his secrets. So I wouldn't want that to happen. There is also the harem thing. I don't want his wives to be dominating or annoying. Like when mc protects them and they realize that they will be left behind by him.. That sentiment shouldn't come and his wives.should behave like a typical harem or else it looks cringe to me.

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SageDaoist4
SageDaoist4Lv3SageDaoist4

ah.. finally mc got some power and I hopes it not the beta mc who like to hide power and appear as weak..

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LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2LohQiwan

Tbh! I don't even care about the revenge, I just want him to explore the world and dominate every single area while collecting girls and becoming stronger. I'm also excited for him to ascend and go to higher realm worlds and see the new power scales there

Redgar_347
Redgar_347Lv11Redgar_347

I still don't understand how can he be Damn sure that she is being forced😣😣 Someone enlighten this almighty!

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Jacob_Solomon
Jacob_SolomonLv1Jacob_Solomon

I like it. Keep up the good work.

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Ste_Grama
Ste_GramaLv4Ste_Grama

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Dayone_Williams
Dayone_WilliamsLv15Dayone_Williams

This is what I've been waiting on dont get me wrong i enjoyed the story this far as well but I just couldn't wait to see him get revenge and thanks for the chapter.

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Mattirro
MattirroLv15Mattirro

cool all the set up is done we can get to the stabby stabby boom boom part.

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John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv13John_Smith_3884

Let the red river run. Thank you for the chapter.

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Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx for the chap

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Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

well the concept maybe cliche(have seen lots of trash young master bullied, treated unfairly, fiancee cheating, clan disowning, parents dead) but the way it is written is good. It keeps the plot interesting and enjoyable. I am hooked up, dont know about other but for me this is good

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Keyweilder
KeyweilderLv6Keyweilder

Thanks for your hard work!

webnovel_1862
webnovel_1862Lv15webnovel_1862

I saved you because of the power of Little Brother

mauro_godoy
mauro_godoyLv2mauro_godoy

Que decepcion total ...esperaba mas pero solo otro Mc beta y historia llena de cliches y cosas inutiles ...sigh

OKEJI_TAMAN
OKEJI_TAMANLv1OKEJI_TAMAN

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon