Comments of chapter undefined of The Mage of Primordial Chaos

Nice prologue, seems promising!! One thing: I knew from the moment Xuan Kai described himself as pretty much a talent-less waste, that he is destined for a harem

K.... Im hyped about the book now. Just praying the mc doesnt think with his dick. you know harem and everything is cool and all but a stupid mc really destroys the story.

hmm I find it a bit amusing how often in books entities/beings/ people whatever, are soo trusting because they sense no malice, you can be killed and tortured without malice, no malice only means in there mind they don't view what they are doing as harmful or mean to you, which doesn't mean you will feel the same way, "no malice" is right up there next to "Good intentions"😏 how many have says something without malice but those words caused plenty of harm? all without malice, same with seemingly innocent(in there mind) actions performed that have caused physical harm, all without malice. a car is headed straight for you, without malice, driver hasn't noticed you, do you move or just stand there waiting to be smooshed because you sense no malice? 😛

Lol

Nice chapter

Thanks for the chap

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Great introduction!

really nice keep it up!

sounds good..here take my stones.✌️

interesting

Interesting prologue I Like your writing style

thx for the chap

I like the way this author writes. Thanks for the chapter.

experience

All right Asta of the Novel World shownus what you got

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