Comments of chapter undefined of The Tale of Three Sisters

A rather unexpected story line but I'm intrigued. Will continue reading!

I love the story! My only suggestion would be to fix the back and forth switching between past and present tense.

very intriguing. looking forward to read more. 😃

I'm becoming more anxious

The story is a bit slow. It is So pleasing to have such caring and protective male characters do far. I loVe the characters.

I like this story but it is slow to Let you know whats going on. please like my comment.

Love the story

they really have a good time...looking forward to more adventures😉

Nice story author.. 🥰

I love the basic storyline. But you’re getting bogged in minutia Also check grammatical tenses. Not being picky just trying to help for smoothness in reading. I almost put it down but the latest journey has my interest again.

It’s slow bit hanging in there

loving it so far. can't wait to read what happens next.

loving it so far. can't wait to see what ja

It’s nice but somehow i found kate’s too much saying “wow” it’s lit bit annoyed me. Anyway don’t mind Me 😅

I like the story,can’t Stop reading,

So far this is very good reading material.

I enjoy very much so far

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

many misspelled words .had to read it again to make sure I read it right .but getting more interesting .