As much as people like this chapter. Am i the only one wondering what happened to the husband? she asked a question then her phone rang, Then she goes outside meets her bro in law(im guessing) and leaves. Did husband just stay in bed the entire time without making a peep?
I find this chapter very shallow and weak
Pls put in more details to give it more life...
Details like: what they’re wearing,
Describing the environment
What car, and all these Little details will give it more live and color .
Great story tho👏