Comments of chapter undefined of Dysfunctional - An Assassin's Guide to Reincarnating in Another World

The MC is lacking in certain areas but we can still appreciate one thing... slight tsundere aspects which means you are a man of culture as well.

The characters are all really bland, specially the mc, I think you tried to take some inspiration from anime characters as you mentioned anime quite a lot of times in the novel, but your characters don't have or show a lot of emotion and come off as shallow and you can't really connect with them. The worldbuilding or magic system is not very good so far either. Just some constructive criticism for points to work on Author, it's pretty good for a first novel, you just need to make some more efforts.

I'm really loving the novel so far

Why did he try out new magic against the barrier? I thought the point was to get a sense of how strong the barrier was? How can you do that when you're also trying to gauge how strong a new attack skill is?

It's great that it's not easy to learn something new with no prior knowledge. I fully expect Kuro to be very instinctive with everything related to battle sense and quite the beginner with mana.

first also thx for the chapter it's a gr8 story so far

The novel have this or that as a problem but is bearable and easy to improve, but this childish MC monologues will make me drop this T.T

cant he learn more anime based skills. chidori, thunder breathing technique or something.

I appreciate the development , but wonder if there shouldn’t be more foreshadowing to hold interest.