Comments of chapter undefined of D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

She needs more last minute mother connection before she is stuck as a cat, this chapter was very important .

Most authors have said the same thing in their notes. There always seams to be a few chapters that just force their way into a story, but were completely unplanned, yet the story just doesn't work right without them. I've lost count of the number of author notes/foreword/byline/interview that mention this happening to them. As such, I wouldn't worry too much about it, so long as it doesn't derail the story your telling.

thanks for the chapter

I’m about to drop this novel. I’m pretty sick of the non existent story development, extremely long descriptions of the same topic in different perspectives and extremely long descriptions of feelings.