eon6456
the censored words in the first few chapters should be swapped with drink or bite
good luck đ
I very much like this story. If you are using Google translate then you might want to find some one for help editing. Your work has improved greatly overall.
MC is sometimes randomly referred to as female, so double check gender pronouns
switch human speech to italics to distinguish between main and side characters
watch should be wench or witch
