Comments of chapter undefined of supreme dragon

supreme dragon

eon6456

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Gem_BrocklerLv4Gem_Brockler

watch should be wench or witch

3yr

Gem_BrocklerLv4Gem_Brockler

good luck 👍

3yr

Become a KOL for my discussion channel!

Engage with others on the app, and become a moderator for my discussion channel. Let this be a place for sharing with other fellow bookworms!

eon6456

Gem_BrocklerLv4Gem_Brockler

I very much like this story. If you are using Google translate then you might want to find some one for help editing. Your work has improved greatly overall.

3yr

Gem_BrocklerLv4Gem_Brockler

MC is sometimes randomly referred to as female, so double check gender pronouns

3yr

Gem_BrocklerLv4Gem_Brockler

switch human speech to italics to distinguish between main and side characters

3yr

Gem_BrocklerLv4Gem_Brockler

the censored words in the first few chapters should be swapped with drink or bite

3yr