Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket [DROPPED]

This was what I was worried about when you had him lose against Gom. No drive for them and with a subpar team, it's going to have to be overwhelming from Shun, which would more than likely highlight the difference in skill between Shun and the Gom, likely changing the story and the schools they would end up going to. Even more so that Toki wouldn't be seeded. Alternatively if you had Shun won 2nd year, by the time 3rd year finals came around, people would most likely already have chosen schools so you could keep Canon fairly intact except for maybe the personalities of people. Well, too late now. I'm sure you'll be able to come up with something though the easiest way might be to go to Serbia or America for a year

maybe take it slow, don't take full break it will be hard when try to come back... read some novel or manga with school genre maybe that can help you get some inspiration

Insted of the games you could just focus on the slice of life aspect of the ff. Then just show the result of his training and the integration of all the skills in the finals against teiko. Any point is we want more slice of Life !!!

Take a short break, i can clearly see symptoms of you burning out, we don't want that, just take a day off and play games or something. P.S. I'm merely saying this cuz i don't want you to drop this fiction on us. have a good health fic

Maybe do some slice of life to where shun meets the generations of miracles and how for high school they will all be going to different schools to even out the competition. Shun flat out declares he will go to where ever satsuki decides to go. Add some fluff and should help you prep for 3rd year. Especially since schools will recruit that year

make a time skip and start at highschool. give same flashback of 3rd year basketball match or something. like in anime of KNB. I want to see highschool games and battle of GOM and shun. dont drop this i best ff take your time author

Just chill and take your time. If you need to take a few days to brainstorm and plan then do it. No need to stress yourself out.

Time skip. Tokinawa lost again. SMA.

Its a good point in the story for fluff chapters so no need for serious thought. Slice-of-life fantasy romance scenarios with momo, family time, beach vacation, etc... If you do want serious chapters you can have MC’s dad’s gym be competing more against Aida Riko’s dad gym but with your current stress level just do some silly romance and family time.

Just do a lot of slice of life chapters, you are great at them, don't force yourself and have fun, your novel is great, one of my favorites at the moment and definitely the best KNB one. Thanks a lot and don't burn out~

Well ****....Now i'm regretting what i said about taking a break Comeback fic please kill yourself for us.

The author also can’t make more excuses for Shun to lose, first game Shun lost because of the author, the second because of exhaustion, now that he can’t use those excuses people want the author to move Shun to another country, such bs

make a time skip and start at highschool. give same flashback of 3rd year basketball match or something. like in anime of KNB. i want to see his highschool games and battle between GOM and shun and make him win at 3rd year. take your time author don't drop this is best KNB FF.

maybe give some slice of life with GoM & Shun w/ some Shun & Momoi action. I would also really like to see a practice game against Shun & GoM since that can be easily done as it is still summer rn. Have Shun ask Momoi if the GoM wants to play some games with him idk.

Thanks for the chapter

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just skip to third year game bro

Thanks

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thanks for the chapter