Comments of chapter undefined of Harry crow ( harry potter fanfic)(FINISHED)

its good written. but the wimpy fuss stretches a bit long. raised by goblins ahould give a high reaistance for a bit of bloodshed, and he already killed the troll und fought 2 other fights. even if he is 12... he is depicted as mature and again raised by a warriorrace ... except that the author did a good job