DonnEll
I like how he kept his name. I know he could've easily chosen a bad-ass name, but keeping at least a mere portion of his identity prior to his previous life is a great thing to do! Be Yourself! Frankly speaking, I didn't do this in my new book (Which I'm currently writing -- if you were wondering...it's called New World Archeria.) I gave my character a cool name.
Am I the only one who disturbed because of the grammer. I mean wtf, is the author rolling a dice to determine which tense he is going to use in the next sentence? But let's not talk about mixing tenses at random there are so many mistakes, it hurts my eyes. And the thing is I'm not even a native speaker. Whenever I'm reading stories with similiar grammar I am scared of getting used to it and worsening my english skills