Comments of chapter undefined of DEATHLY APP

Somehow, I relate to Hastin on a spiritual level! He's an introvert that is isolated on his own home like me! Also what does that killinh people thingy does?? Nice story so far!

The use of Hastin is much, do try to change it soon, as you would be getting more readers soonest. Also pls tell me Hastin picked Horror : Author has d right to order wat again?? Cos dis thing is tricky killing pple

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Great scary start, story narration is excellent.. unique story, some sequences sound too real and in the face while reading on phone. lol

So far, so good. Quite good actually ^_^ An interesting premise given along with a protagonist that has their odd desire to become a 'famous' writer. If anything, I'd imagine that the reason why he wanted to become a famous person was to earn recognition and acceptance from others. Imagine not ever meeting a human being apart from your father...

I was attracted to the story and I want to continue reading. However, I found the term to mention it used as "he" in almost every paragraph very repetitive. I advise you to decrease when using your own name. Hastin thought ... Hastin was curious ... You can refer to it using "him", but not very often, because it gets tiring. The novel has a good premise, I will accompany and support you!

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