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I am wondering as well where the art comes in. It gave him a little insight and a super-power, but then it has gone away. I know the MC has been busy with trying to get into the academy, but if he doesn't use the skill, won't it fade? At this point, it almost seems he needs to create his own 'body' with the art skill rather than just follow one of the blueprints he's just gained access to.
Thanks for butchering the godfiend body "terms". Wth is 'Lighting Devastetor Divine Body'. The original term is "Thunderclap World Annihilation Devil Body". It is understandable if you change the "devil->fiend" like that; but to butcher whole name and make it sound like it's a second grade(high grade) godfiend body is just too much. Also you did the same with almost all of them. Only "Samsara Divine Body" sounds better. Pls change the terms to their original. "Great Strength Fiend Body-> Mighty Devil Body" "Lighting Devastator Body-> Thunderclap World Annihilation/Extinguishing Devil Body" "Archean Divine Body-> Primeval God Body" "Two World Divine Body-> Twin-World Divine Body" "Phoenix Divine Body-> Phoenix God Body" "Dragon Divine Body-> Dragon God Body" "Eon Sea Fiend Body-> Blue/Azure Sea Fiend Body" I am pretty sure these sounds much better. Btw, you changed the name of the novel too. It's hard find the novel because of this.
I wish that painting was more involved in this. It's the main reason I wanted to read it. I know with the soul and everything but that is so rare and we only see the painting side rarely when it's time to grow the soul. Idk, just want it to be more involved in other aspects. Like have the painting as his core and grow from that. So his swordplay is like how he paints, when he paints he improves his swordplay, it helps keep his mind calm etc I just feel like the whole lighting thing and speed etc is used way to much making it generic. Don't get me wrong it makes the story great however it doesn't make it stand out. Something unique, something I haven't read before.