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Comments of chapter undefined of Archean Eon Art

Dervish
DervishLv4Dervish

I am wondering as well where the art comes in. It gave him a little insight and a super-power, but then it has gone away. I know the MC has been busy with trying to get into the academy, but if he doesn't use the skill, won't it fade? At this point, it almost seems he needs to create his own 'body' with the art skill rather than just follow one of the blueprints he's just gained access to.

Yolo_Natss
Yolo_NatssLv12Yolo_Natss

This novel have extremely good writing, it’s a fact. The story, world background and character are very good. But why do I feel it’s also a little bland ? It’s like fast food, as in industrial quantity and good quality/price.

sblego11
sblego11Lv4sblego11

I feel like Yun Fu’an is either gonna betray MC to the demons or join the Skydemon Sect once the academy arc ends

SodaBo_Bomb
SodaBo_BombLv14SodaBo_Bomb

The Pheonix Trancedant Godfiend is bad news for his childhoood friend. I predict lots of life-force burning in her future.

Tanjim_Hasan
Tanjim_HasanLv1Tanjim_Hasan

Thanks for butchering the godfiend body "terms". Wth is 'Lighting Devastetor Divine Body'. The original term is "Thunderclap World Annihilation Devil Body". It is understandable if you change the "devil->fiend" like that; but to butcher whole name and make it sound like it's a second grade(high grade) godfiend body is just too much. Also you did the same with almost all of them. Only "Samsara Divine Body" sounds better. Pls change the terms to their original. "Great Strength Fiend Body-> Mighty Devil Body" "Lighting Devastator Body-> Thunderclap World Annihilation/Extinguishing Devil Body" "Archean Divine Body-> Primeval God Body" "Two World Divine Body-> Twin-World Divine Body" "Phoenix Divine Body-> Phoenix God Body" "Dragon Divine Body-> Dragon God Body" "Eon Sea Fiend Body-> Blue/Azure Sea Fiend Body" I am pretty sure these sounds much better. Btw, you changed the name of the novel too. It's hard find the novel because of this.

Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14Aeternabilis

I wish that painting was more involved in this. It's the main reason I wanted to read it. I know with the soul and everything but that is so rare and we only see the painting side rarely when it's time to grow the soul. Idk, just want it to be more involved in other aspects. Like have the painting as his core and grow from that. So his swordplay is like how he paints, when he paints he improves his swordplay, it helps keep his mind calm etc I just feel like the whole lighting thing and speed etc is used way to much making it generic. Don't get me wrong it makes the story great however it doesn't make it stand out. Something unique, something I haven't read before.

No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15No_Reading_No_Life

Fairy Meng makes me remember my Grandma😢

_2567
_2567Lv3_2567

I can't wait to find out what body he picks, maybe he will make his own up and create his own path?

JPNovelFan
JPNovelFanLv15JPNovelFan

Sad that she’ll die but at least the Meng family has a new pillar that will soon support them. Especially now that MC is able to deter some schemes just because he is with the sect.

alan_lopez
alan_lopezLv5alan_lopez

xp

FilthiestCReader
FilthiestCReaderLv6FilthiestCReader

Is the title of the novel going to be his legacy or something to do with the soul space in his mind, probs the latter but still.

EvilAsura
EvilAsuraLv14EvilAsura

ty for chapter :) sad to her die

paih
paihLv7paih

Thanks

pxrince
pxrinceLv13pxrince

Lightning Devastator it is

Wijohn
WijohnLv14Wijohn

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Rahul7
Rahul7Lv7Rahul7

Thank you for the chapter

ojslive
ojsliveLv14ojslive

Thanks

SilentWeapon
SilentWeaponLv15SilentWeapon

Thanks for the chapter

SunWudao
SunWudaoLv7SunWudao

Thanks for the chapter

Barbaferro
BarbaferroLv14Barbaferro

Thanks for the chapter.