Comments of chapter undefined of God of Vampires

At last a story with alright grammar, the last few stories had my brain go Mush

Nice start! very promising prologue

Cool

Mhmm I like it the prologue is good and the grammar is great thx for the chapter

Mhmm I like it the prologue is good and the grammar is great thx for the chapter

Hmm Nice prologue okay grammar I'm looking forward to reading this

I can't read it with straight face. It really looks like it written by kid for kids. All sorts of naive, dumb and awkward.

Looks good so far.

Prologue is ok there are no problems with the contents of the prologue

👍

that prologue was really good

Nice chapter

Thx

for a first time ur doing pretty well it's not perfect but I like it

You need grammar, a few minor mistakes, and I don't know why, but a lot of authors write names small

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I can’t really tell if all the commentors who said the prologue is good were being sarcastic or not..

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