DrakeGrimmhound
Not a big thing, but Dobby was born in the Malfoy house not bough. Still minor detail that doesn't have... Wait this is a major change in the story. Author, I hope you have taken count of this very important change in the time line. Sure, Dobby in the original story at first, was a major pain n the butt. But he does play some important parts later on in the story. Still with having Dobby serve this MC, my guess is that you will ditch the original timeline. I guess Ill see if you decide to take notes of all this change, will do to the story. If nothing changes in the plot, well I will be disappointed. Thanks for the chapter, keep it up.