Srinlife
Yes, this story is cool. I wasn't too keen at the start, with the stereotypical Inn at the crossroads, it felt a little too, simplistic? Contrived? I almost feel that part could be completely removed unless it ever shows up again in the story. I like the characters, the world building is well mixed in so the action keeps a good pace. I like the long chapters. I am having one issue, and I'm not sure why. Some of the explanations of spells, or even action, I misunderstand or am confused. Like Hard Lesson, it wasn't very clear to me how the MC would benefit, because I found the last bit, about the User being a target, confusing. There are also a few extra words here and there, nothing too glaring, considering the competition. Thanks for your hard work. Please keep it up. :-)