vinayraj
What ungrateful brat like he just forgot that he was dead, if not for system which gave him an chance at survival, now he angry at system as if system owns him money. While some commenting that he is systems slave, he was originally dead which already kind to give an chance at life. And it is only logical that someone would invest in you if show your potential and in an world where human lives are like grass people rather be slave than an corpse. If have so much pride and ego then first you should have strength to back it up rather than relying on system to save your sorry ass. If you don't want to be system's slave then be better stop complaining about life being unfair rather make own decisions and profit from then system will just become an axillary help for you
Sorry but i Will wirght in português. Eu n tô consegui ficar muito emocionado lendo a história parece que está faltando um " clima " e eu n consigo simpatizar ou me importar com a situação ou situações creio que seja pela falta de detalhes em partes chaves dos capítulos então minha dica é tente dar mais importância a esse pontos q você considera importantes e coloque mais detalhes. Mesmo q eu esteja vários meses atrasado nesse comentário ele pode ser útil para os capítulos atuais embora ainda n tenha chegado neles