Comments of chapter undefined of Paragon of Sin

Author, this is not how you write a proper adventure arc. You don’t just write a summary of how things play out and decide to tell how things went by having all actions being off screen. That is the most boring way to write. You should have wrote at least a few chapters about them fighting these beasts races and how they fare against high level beings. Even how the girl tame that hyena would still have been a decent story than what you show today. If this is how you write the story, then this whole trip is a huge waste of our time, because all the real action happen off screen. We aren’t actually reading a adventure. But merely a summary of a adventure that is extremely boring by you just time skipping eveything.