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Comments of chapter undefined of Paragon of Sin

Zancetto
ZancettoLv15Zancetto

I wish this novel didn’t dissolve into 17 paragraphs of posture out of 20

15Marz
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I don’t know what happened but from the last 2 chapter I had the feeling of reading 25 pages of gibberish…just to resume the fact that WW cames to rescue QQ from the elven queen…

TanyaSilver
TanyaSilverLv15TanyaSilver

Every one of these mini arc’s has more recap, describtion of the surroundings, backstory or whatever than the actual present story. The conversations are bare as bones. The action even worse. With the actual characters involve barely even having any screen time at all in the chapters. Han Xie barely got a few words out. Demon Abass Master was even worse. We didn’t even get to see the demons fight. The arc’s are very badly done with them having too few screen times before mc move on. It could have been done better. It was totally meaningless for him to carry his saber and bring Bai Lin along if the fights are this boring.

UrBoyAD
UrBoyADLv15UrBoyAD

I really hope that he didn’t know that she was here until now. It would really change my view of our MC if he knew all along that she was being tortured here like this and never came to save her.