Comments of chapter undefined of Paragon of Sin
Paragon of Sin
KevinAscending
Chapter comments14
Jesus author. Just because it’s almost the end of the month doesn’t mean you should get lazy and release this kind of medicore chapter. 80% of it was nonsense about Bai Lin view on his women. Not only you return back to 1ch per day but the page count is even getting shorter. This isn’t really gonna convince us readers to renew our privilege next month. This whole arc has been losing it’s hype with each day at this rate.
The only females I care about in the novel are Su Mei and Xue Yufei, the rest don’t really matter. I understand the author likes to showcase each character but please don’t spend a whole on them. I like how the author showcased them in the elemental trial arc but this chapter is not needed. We don’t need bai lin’s opinion on all the girls, it’s not like she’s gonna say she doesn’t like them( which would be interesting if it happened, but I highly doubt it).
This is just my thoughts and granted I am not an author so please take what ya want from this. You are both an incredible scene creator but also impressive time waster. This statement is not to come off as aggressive however literally if we go to any other Ark with exception of the last like 20ish chapters of the previous Ark your pacing has almost 180'ed. Now I can understand wanting maybe slower chapters and or being burnt out of want or ideas (Happens when I DM games sometimes), but you have as of right now currently made a reunion with 3 (4 if we inculcated Bai Lin) of the most liked characters since you introduced them to about as exciting as studying for an exam while being sleep deprived and overworked. It's bizarre to me that you have you go from highlighted details, intense fighting, great wordplay to almost half a chapter of filler when before hand Bai Lin looked over someone for about a paragraph and then moved on. Sometimes more is just less. For instance you to date have probably made an astronomical amount of details for Cultivation, Intents, and oh my good lord Alchemy. However before hand when WW would study and learn though several chapters while still interacting with the story its not a wall of text of such saturated overexplained info that almost the entire chapter is gone from it. Granted I can understand huge giant things like World Heart Intent or Breakthroughs, but for borderline entire chapters to be viewed as an action or reactions of two people from a simple stare it's starring to feel like I'm getting robbed for paging coins here. This might be a messy explanation and I am sorry for that, but I just wanted to mention something. From your story to still even now you are by far my favorite Cultivation Author today, and I just hope you find the original groove again. Cause as it stands this feels like robbery for me wanting to be interested in your world.
I am. Sin-head thru & thru to the point i had to move money around to buy priveledge this month but i did. I dont know if i can in this next month bc it isnt enough content for me to do that again. This chapter has been a deciding factor bc as said before it was shorter and lacked excitment, which would have been fine if there was another chapter to follow but there wasn't "sigh" i hope u address this bc i am a loyal reader...
I mentioned it a few chapters ago and it looks like more are echoing the point now. Yes we love the story and yes we are willing to support the author but with the last few chapters and the reduction in chapters per week it makes no sense to continue supporting the book on a regular basis. I'm fine with side character chapters but adding on a slow release rate, unfortunately I no longer find it worth supporting the book at least for now. If the author does see this message I would think it would make more sense to keep your supporters hooked and supporting you every month compared to once every few months or a total drop. Unless of course you literally can't write or have a stockpile that allows for more chapters per day, then ignore the advice I guess. Good luck Mr. Author love the story imo deserves to be higher up in the ranks too.
