Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon’s Bride

I thank You for the story. I think this is a good and interesting story line for these two. They are both so clever I am sure they will have luck on their side.❤️

I am very sorry but this story is getting long drawn out and a bit dull. No offence but having a hard time sticking with it. Can we get back to Ian and Elise or at least something a bit less to unravel with Beel and Esther?