Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon’s Bride

I like and enjoy the plot, but my reading enjoyment is spoiled by the bad writing - in terms of grammer, typos, descriptive words etc. Its seems like this story has been badly translated from another language.

Here are many worries and questions. Will he betray them, will ian die, what will she do with this new information ...I mean every time she gets herself into trouble because she doesn’t have all the truth about what’s going on. then there is her unusual abilities that don’t seem to be normal. I mean, what’s that all about.

I wish the chapters were longer, tgey seem to end in the middle of context instead of at the usual break..... how unfortunate to have to use a fastpass just to finish a train if thought.

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I like the Reaper as a chick. I wish Elise wouldn't be as clueless.

😁😁

hallow will have to suffer in the mansion

That's so sad.

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Why do I have a feeling Hallow is going to betray them at some point?