Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon’s Bride

Aye, we have demon vs vampire in the open. Too bad for the vampire setting his eyes on the demon's puppy. May he have a nice chase with Curly and Ian will curb him of his primary desire.

Oh Edward...

I like it!

This vampire Lord is simply courting death...how dare he harbor evil thoughts about our Lord Ian's sweet puppy, Elise... can't you see our Elise only have eyes for our Master Ian & our Master Ian only have one puppy & that's his future wifey Elise

Oh Eddie your gonna be curly food soon

Mm I wonder what going to happen with Ian and Elise. I hope they compass their feeling for each other.

Love this book can't wait for more chapters

uh oh :D

Love rival😍😍😍

Welp looks like he has competition with the vampire tho the demon seems to already have captured the sweet child’s heart a little or so I think anyways I can’t wait read more it really has my interest so far and don’t see myself stopping in the middle anytime soon either 😂 This is basically me when reading :

Uh oh i sense a battle of love approaching though ita not much of a competition as Ian already won . Sorry Edward

The vampire lord has designs on Elsie

yes

Every time I read this story, I'm always reminded of Valerian Empire .. almost, almost same story line and all, I can easily predict this book . no offense to the author

well well well heres the rival 😂😂 but sorry to say this Edward i already burn some candle for you deep in my heart 😅 Ian won't let you near his puppy 😂😂

I'm feeling giddy for the next chapters but it's lockedddd😔😔

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon