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Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon’s Bride

AnneMarieC
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You had me hooked since the beginning and now that the chapters are edited to perfection I am in love with the book. Every little moment between Elise and Ian is sweet and warm. I can't wait to see how the relationship continues to develop 💖

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KrisT4242
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I wish i was this creative Great story!

Daoistoekpdz
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Ian is becoming very Jealous at the young boy paying attention to Elsie

Wendy_Lefrancois_3031
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I love his jealousy

ImConfusedAF
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Maroons probably upset because she brought him extra work with ask if the other mythical beats trying to attack the mansion

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Ashley_McConnell_9992
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Ohhhhs Snap! Great chapter

Mystical_Thirst
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DaoistUOFR3X
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I just want to say that if there are author like you who konw how to write like theses novels then people like us who like to read these types will love you

Debbe_Phillips
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I think it's great he's feeling stuff

saraliyuu_
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its okay to be petty Ian!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Tess_Clouds
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Ohf,,! Lucifer laughed His heart ♥️ is being vascularized🥂

LadyInBlack16
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💕💕

Alvarado_Ivonee
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bueno

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Heidi_LeMay_Holmes
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This novel has a lot of potential. I just wish it would move a little faster. I'm having a hard time being able to stay concentrated. It would help to know more about Elise and Ian. There is too much diaglog. just some constructive criticism!😉💖

Cathy_Allen_Oliver
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

DaoistZbSd5Z
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Great story

Ana_Rivera_9684
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Kuennie_08
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Oh sweet jealousy 😊