Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon’s Bride

this is a pretty good story, but it's hard follow. every sentence has writing errors that don't make sense. it seriously needed to be proof read before it was posted.

What a bastards to believe they call themeselfs a living creation with feelings slavery was always something that the human life hell I hate them so cruel they be burnt in hell (sorry for being angry and cursing author )thanks for the chapter

Aurthor please have a proofreader fix your story. It has great potential. Fixing it will make it Awesome.

The grammar is killing me 😬

Seriously am I the only one who sees they have not describe Elise yet🤔🤔🧐

This is child and women abuse. Somebody somewhere please come and rescue them. I feel for them😭😭😭😭

this is good so far.I hope it continues to be as good as the beginning.

Great start !! Second book I have read in this site and I on roll

Already into the story and let me just say...i am pissed

Hooked!

very good

So sweet and awesome congratulations

interesting looking forward to what's next

Amazing start

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

curling up my toes

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Only a few chapters in but this story so far has gripped me.… I hope the traders get what they deserve! 🤬

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This is horrible! An 8 year old girl? I'm glad there's nothing like slavery in the world now.