so much better.. there you go your ideas shine through and the story is finally believable again. he got his wits back. and for the return to the sense i gave u my stone and will update my critique
I can't stand it any more! Help! Can we please change it to little world? Every time I read small world I start singing...
🎶It's a small world after all
It's a small world after all🎵
🎵It's a small world after all
It's a small, small, world🎶