White-Headed Dream
I feel like all of us that read the comic first are reading this with bias, we just want her to accept Curtis fast even though it's unreasonable at the moment
Translation is definitely better, more flowing than the original. I just wish there was more depth, for instance, in describing her aversion to snakes--the horror and ickiness of being held in those gigantic coils. It would make the change from fear to acceptance, and the build up to attraction and genuine affection, much more relatable.