Overlord_Venus
This chapter has ruined your story I've dropped it I put up with the multiple perspectives for 35 chapters hoping you would be creative in MCs take over or merger instead you murder bunch of people needlessly, and fail in your attempts at creating suspence and intrigue only creating an annoyance
Bruh, of course you think the slaughter was pointless cuz you clearly didn’t read the world setting author was trying to build. People have to go crazy if their parasite gets taken over. Also, stories with multiple perspectives create a level of depth and character development that single perspective novels fail to create. But whatever, you leaving doesn’t matter anyways lol
40 chapters of him doing nothing. another 20 to fool others while doing nothing. suddenly, everything before is actually useless, all characters we watched over wasted or dead, and shitty and predictable twist in the end, despite the fact that you showed us her thoughts moments ago and she was completely different person. i hate it and i hate how much time and nerves you have wasted for me.
I'm not sure what to think about the story at this point. Normally, I'd be rooting for the MC and those close to him to succeed, but now it feels like I want everyone to fail ._. I personally would have preferred a route where Jyorta wasn't completely gone and at least the sister was human, maybe managing to give her brother some degree of control while not actually defeating the MC. Get a nice Shinichi/Migi (Parasyte: The Maxim) vibe going
Aww come on! I wanted to se Kal and the sister duking It out, but now we knowthe sister is a fake too? Then why did she try to throw him under the bus. why did she draw atention to his condition to such a degree, after all this could back fire making it possible for her to be discovered as well!!! Nothing in this chapter makes sense to me.
honestly, I think I'm gonna pass on this one for now. I don't think I've read enough chapters to leave a review so I'm just gonna put my thoughts here. The story and the power system is intriguing, making me want to see more of it, but at the same time, it's cancelled by my worry of wasting time reading through long, dense, arduous to read chapters and also the various negative comments about my worry, amplifying it. I'll probably pick this up again in the future, when I think that I can get through this writing style, or maybe I will read it again tomorrow because of my indecisive self, who knows. My only advice is to delete negative comments that is not constructive and just straight out attack you. It contributed me putting this novel aside, planting a seed of doubt in my mind.