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Comments of chapter undefined of A Slave To My Vengeful Lover

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Smoors
SmoorsLv15Smoors

I want more!! Love the storyline. Please write more Soon.

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Nidhi_Sankhe
Nidhi_SankheLv14Nidhi_Sankhe

I think the interrogation should be done as soon as possible with the concrete evidence so that there might no loop holes for Lucas to escape and then Anna may also know his true colors.

AmitPant
AmitPantLv14AmitPant

Anna hoe foolish of you..still believing your Dad...author we are again stuck in time warp

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Ofa_Lavidel_Etiko
Ofa_Lavidel_EtikoLv4Ofa_Lavidel_Etiko

It been long finally don with exams glad to see updates from you Author And anna please have sense and try to see things differently

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oblivion_beauty
oblivion_beautyLv1oblivion_beauty

Dear Author The Story has been amazing untill now and I love how the story plot has twists and turns. This is just a small suggestion. The writing has some grammar errors that creates bumps while reading and doesn't let the readers to have a smooth read. My suggestion is to have an editor who can do the editing for you and make your book even more amazing. Please do reach out to me and I'll do the first two chapters editing and you can see how different it sounds with sound English writing. Not trying to offend you in any way, just a friendly suggestion. Thanks for the amazing story though 😍😍

StaceyCorbett_1974
StaceyCorbett_1974Lv15StaceyCorbett_1974

Anna just needs to stop and let Tom finish the investigation. She keeps on she will mess it up

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Midge01
Midge01Lv15Midge01

loving this story but I wish the interrogation would be done soon, also what a short chapter this was.

Karen_Fields
Karen_FieldsLv13Karen_Fields

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola