AnnaMark
Dear Author The Story has been amazing untill now and I love how the story plot has twists and turns. This is just a small suggestion. The writing has some grammar errors that creates bumps while reading and doesn't let the readers to have a smooth read. My suggestion is to have an editor who can do the editing for you and make your book even more amazing. Please do reach out to me and I'll do the first two chapters editing and you can see how different it sounds with sound English writing. Not trying to offend you in any way, just a friendly suggestion. Thanks for the amazing story though đđ