Comments of chapter undefined of A Slave To My Vengeful Lover

It’s so hard reading something with poor grammar and misspellings. Please ask someone to proof read your work. It will help a lot.

I love it! This is so good nice job on It! [img=recommend]

The English is filled with errors, try to correct the errors

Your book is reasonable but what boring is that we read the same event twice

the story definitely needs some editing skills but the storyline and characters are great

this story doesn't go right with me... the story lineeeeee... ...just is too sloppy

the TEA is to die for

Sentence structure & Grammar. Driving me nuts its so bad, not sure why I continue to read. WORD corrects those things for you if you set it up too.

I could help you proof read just a bit, I love this novel it's just the writing skills and stuff, but if you need anymore editors, I would luv to edit 💖

I'm not an English speaking, but grammar mistakes are obvious. I like the story line, but some editor work would really help. Good luck 🍀

I'm loving this

Hmmmn interesting

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

He have feelings for her

good story!![img=recommend]

going interesting

It doesn’t feel interesting as reader would like to hv their own pov

Is the whole book of pov

Nice chapter